sissyjamieanne
4/30/2018 01:36:58 am
Another wonderful installment...great story and well written! Our poor sissy’s life is getting more and more difficult as Myrna tightens the reigns and makes him continually thank her for his training and humiliation! I love the little details in this one (including the soap balls) and love that the girls will be playing a very active role in his discipline/punishment and humiliation! Thank you for a nicely written tale...I do hope you’ll continue.
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5/2/2018 02:36:52 pm
poor georgette....
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SSG
5/14/2018 01:22:00 pm
I love this page and all you’re stories. Can’t wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I am also wondering if you carrying on the step daughter domination stories as well as the mother in law domination stories.
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Mistress Holly
2/18/2021 04:33:29 am
Alright Sally your efforts are satisfactory and your use of rich detail is improving. It does seem that you have continuity issues now and then: for instance in the previous chapter, Georgette’s uniform was neoprene lined precisely to prevent stains and accidents showing. However there would be a subtile stream of sissy urine down its legs and of course darkening its dark hose, pooling in its shoes. But those details are significant to a close reader. You need to get in the practise of re-reading the story leading up to each new chapter as you begin to write it so the previous details are fresh in your mind. I suspect you may skip this step because it stimulates discomfort in your chastity. But as a writer you are as a servant to your readership and the slight discomfort and inconvenience to make the reader’s experience flawless should be viewed as an honour! I might recommend that you wear clothes pegs clipped to your nipples for the entire time you must reread previous chapters so that you will likely speed through this process, removing them quickly once you, again, begin writing the new chapter.
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charles tuna
8/17/2022 03:17:06 pm
This little pearly soap ball punishment is just splendid . I love the way this sissy must moisturize these little balls of soap in his mouth before popping them into his bottom. I can't believe he would complain about the soapy taste in his mouth while having to suck them. More of this punishment please ,I would love to see how many of these "soap pearls" our little sissy could take .
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